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Adrian: Very good job Adrian I liked how you made a different way to use dominoes but maybe next time tell us what is going on when there there.
Luka

Brooklyn

Good job brooky I liked how detailed it was but next time check your grammar.
Luka

Aiden

Good job aiden i liked how you thought of another game with dominoes but maybe next time you should tell us whats going on in more detail.
Luka

Archie

Nice Archie I liked how you used the emotion by saying: Others looked on in horror as friends and family fell but maybe next time you should make your conclusion a bit longer.

Luka

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